Linger

Linger

A Poem by I'm trying my best okay
"

for the self-love contest

"
You could, 
linger on mistakes
and words never spoken
that hurt you 
more than anyone could see

but if you were to show,
the things you linger on to another,
they would be suprised,
for you to linger on it.

believe me, they are too busy stuck on their own ridiculous truths.

so, try to, 
for a little bit,
take off your personal biases,
turned against yourself,
and see,
that really,
nothing is as wrong as you thought it was.

You could,
for a minute, 
take your finger off the pain,
and choose to linger on something else instead.

© 2023 I'm trying my best okay


Author's Note

I'm trying my best okay
I wish I could take my own advice- enjoy.

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I saw a title of how one could.linger but it's not love but one that won't let like leave me alone, I love how you brought this together great flow and and great memories of what could be
Thank you for sharing

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on December 30, 2022
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I'm trying my best okay
I'm trying my best okay

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