The Worst Hell

Yes I'm aware of the crappiness of this poem

It hurts...

like your oxygen being cut off.
like your blood stopping.

It hurts like being torn in two.

A broken heart is hard to mend,
it kinda makes you wish your life could end.
You can't make yourself care,
you just know your other half isn't there.

It's like...

you don't know what to do.
like your world turned upside down.

It's like not knowing happiness.

A broken heart hurts like the worst hell,
it makes us wonder why we fell.
You think nothing will ever make you smile again,
wishing things would go back to how they should've been.

Reviews

[Northend]

i been there hunny but i found that one thing that makes me smile again and that is you. i konw i broke down one night i normaly dont do that its been 8 years senice the last time i broke down. you need to konw yes ppl have fucked with my head big time and i am really down and it still hurts. cuz i still think about it but when i am with you. im so happy i can tell you just how much you make me smile and make me less worryed you can tell that i love?

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

This poem is amazing JPM...you shouldn't say other wise
Great Job