Upside Down

Upside Down

A Poem by Just Plain Me
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I came up with this in the shower...don't ask. lol

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Your upside down, is my upside right...
   your good morning, is my goodnight.
Your blind spot, could be my sight...
   and your dark could be my light.

You like things inside right, I like them inside out...
   you live in certainty of the facts I doubt.
You like your words softly spoken, whereas I love to shout!
   and you cry when you don't get what you want, I just pout.

What I'm trying to say is this...
Think about the person themself before you diss.
There is little details everyone can miss...
and if you find something you do not like? Don't hiss.

© 2010 Just Plain Me


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Just Plain Me
Bleh

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Great poem!
It's Awesome and i love the different colors
=]

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's amazingness..i loves it :}
Great Job

Posted 14 Years Ago


aww. this is a cute write. and i enjoyed it. it's so simple. perhaps tweak it up a bit and see if you can publish it in something for children. =]

and love the colors!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wise words.Never judge a book by its cover I enjoyed Rhyming excellent but no meter sadly

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oohh, I like this one!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

upside down is right. but it's cool how some people can find some things so easy while others struggle, and vice versa. the little things that make us who we are. nice one

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 12, 2009
Last Updated on March 25, 2010

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Just Plain Me
Just Plain Me

Olympia, WA



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