A Step Into The Future

These words just wont come out,
what the heck is this all about?!
Telling you the words is simple enough,
trying to express them? Now this is tough.

I can't describe how much you make me chuckle,
or how when I'm just talking to you, you make my knees buckle.
I can't explain how much it hurts to see you cry,
or how when I see you upset, I want to die.

I don't know how to prove myself to you,
even though you tell me no, its just something I have to do.
I don't know where to find the words to tell you true,
just how much it means when you tell me, "I love you."

I'm sorry my heart walls are so dense,
sorry I'm still afraid to jump that last fence.
I'm sorry I'm not good at saying how I feel,
but know that all I tell you is real.

I'm trying so hard to explain,
but it just wont come out...like a stubborn old stain.
So I'll just spit it out, unrefined, but completely sincere,
I love you, wholly and completely, and I know I have nothing to fear.

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Sorenel Rain]

This is beautifully written, it is hard to write a poem like this. The feelings I have for my boyfriend are so hard to explain even though I want to tell him just how much I love him...I'm trying to say the words the right way, but so far its not working.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Wow i love this :)
Great Job

[Anastasia Starlena]

This was an absolutely exquisite piece. Saying what is in your heart sometimes is such a beautiful thing. This piece was captivating and yes I think you can write this. I have never read your work but I am a diehard romantic. So I read this and thought absolutely amazing. Great piece.

[visions of doom]

would that all romantic writers have such a wonderful first attempt , i thoroughly enjoyed reading this and i'm going to love watching you develop a whole new style of writing , you old soppy romantic you .

[Butterflymom]

This is special, heartfelt, honest, and raw! Well done.