Why?!

Why?!

A Poem by Just Plain Me
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just my brain working again...it needs to stop that.

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why can’t I take his hurts away?
why can’t I give him a hug?
why is he the one who has to hurt so much?

why am I getting better, while he gets sicker?
why have I had so much love, while he’s had so much hate?
why has my life been so much easier?

why couldn’t we have met in the middle?
why is his life so hard?
why can’t I take his pain and memories, so he can have my joy and laughter?

© 2010 Just Plain Me


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Ohh what a beautiful write,so much lovely sentiment here..
Why cant I take his hurts away,long to give him a hug,why is he the one to hurt so much
I am getting better ,and he getting sicker,I had so much love,while he gets so much hate
Why life is ever so hard,cant I take his pains away,so he has my joy and laughter..oh why
Oh what a lovely ,dreamy write,how i enjoyed it,you have such a strong feelings in writing
lovely write..

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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this is beautiful. I really like it. great job!


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

one word:
amazing!

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

i really loved it...!you did a nice job...!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Ohh what a beautiful write,so much lovely sentiment here..
Why cant I take his hurts away,long to give him a hug,why is he the one to hurt so much
I am getting better ,and he getting sicker,I had so much love,while he gets so much hate
Why life is ever so hard,cant I take his pains away,so he has my joy and laughter..oh why
Oh what a lovely ,dreamy write,how i enjoyed it,you have such a strong feelings in writing
lovely write..

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I love this...you did a wonderful job :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 19, 2009
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Just Plain Me
Just Plain Me

Olympia, WA



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