Twitterpated

Something my mom said yesterday reminded me that I wanted to write this

Does he know he makes my heart skip a beat?
-that he gives me courage, when I’m ready to admit defeat?
Does he know he’s the first thought that’s in my head when I wake?
-When I see the heart my hand just had to make?

Never knowing what I’m going to feel next,
Always trying to find a hidden text.
Sometimes wondering why he chose me,
Usually thinking he could do so much better…he must be crazy.

He has made me Twiterpated,
quite frankly, I’m excited.
This is just a small collection of words, special for my Silly,
hopefully showing that I love him…really.

Author's Note

My mom may have reminded me about it...but its for Shawn. lol

Reviews

[Ralphy]

Awe, this is a wonderful write. I can get into your thought, even if I like throwing snowballs at you. It was very sensitive, and full of warmth. I mean, I can understand what he sees in you, you are a wonderful person...so be it what it may, you deservers him as much as he deserves you...wonderful flowing write

[Jim Clarke]

What I like about this poem is the wayyou have captured the feeling of young love. I also like the "Bambi" word.

[John Morris]

A heartwarming piece really well done.

Love the word twiterpated - really I'm going to be saying that constantly all day now.

This flows really well and paints a picture of perfect love in your mind.

Looking forward for more.

[Wolfwind Words]

That's a wonderful way to express emotions for another! Cute and honest...direct to the point in a friendly way!
Arn't mom's great for remembering what's important!

Cool Ink!
Aaron Maycroft

[*** Hey Jude***]

This is so refreshing. From your expressions of love to the term "Twiterpated"!
Very Nice ~ Jude :-)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

hahaha i love it..it kinda reminds me of Bambi...the twitterpatted part anyway..lmbo..anyway you did a wonderful job..i feel the same way to sometimes :D
Great Job :)

[bluessadmood]

Oh this is so nice and lovely ..I wonder why he chose me ,he must be crazy
ha ha,How men like women to look so humble to them and so submissive..
You make my heart skip a beat..He gives me courage when I feel defeat
Trying to find the hidden text ,why he ever chose me..he must be crazy
He makes me feel so strange and I try to find words for my special silly
showing how I loved him always..really
I really enjoyed this ..
lovely write..

[wolfsshadow25]

every well put i like your Descriptions

[jessie]

wonderful poem it warmed my heart when i read it.