Just Simple Words

I love you lots :D

"I love you"...well those are just words.
but words are all we have...
so let me try to describe how you make me feel...
though i'm not sure its possible.

When you say "I love you" i feel like i'm in a dream...
no one was supposed to say that to me.
When you tell me you wish i was there, i want nothing else...
i'm amazed that anyone wants me at all.
When you called me for the first time, i felt like my heart had stopped...
but then i was estatic to hear your voice.

When you say you're having a bad day, i instantly want to make it better...
i hate it when i cant.
When you tell me you're in pain, i want to take it away...
and i feel like that till you smile.
When you talk about you're living Hell, all i want is too get you away...
i  know you don't deserve that.

All these are, just like "I love you" are words...
but they're all i have.
Simple words can't describe how i feel about you...
but here are three more... "I love you."

Author's Note

Yeah, i know...its not that great...but give me a break, its 5 in the morning.
oh, and if you have a better picture for this, please tell me. lol

Reviews

[17thWhitePrince]

WoW ... This Is Completely Amazing !!!
What A Most Wonderful Poem Indeed !!!
It's So Beautifully Portrayed !!!
I Can Relate To All That Is Being Said In A Certain Way :) :D

"When you say 'I love you' i feel like i'm in a dream...
no one was supposed to say that to me.
When you tell me you wish i was there, i want nothing else...
i'm amazed that anyone wants me at all.
When you called me for the first time, i felt like my heart had stopped...
but then i was estatic to hear your voice.

"When you say you're having a bad day, i instantly want to make it better...
i hate it when i cant.
When you tell me you're in pain, i want to take it away...
and i feel like that till you smile.
When you talk about you're living Hell, all i want is too get you away...
i know you don't deserve that."

A True Marvel Indeed !!!

[EpicKizzy]

ich liebe dich!!!!

[Last Lying Look]

I like this.
Another great write.
But yeah, words are just words.
Actions speak louder than words.
This is pretty good for 5 in the morning.
Great piece.
-Elissa :)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

This is great...i love it...it comes from your heart...sometimes i feel the same way..and you know what i mean :) (hopefully...lol)

[Bran the Broken]

simply, honestly written. don't try to change it. but i recommend Spell-check. for example, it should be 'ecstatic', not 'estatic'

overall, good honest open write