The Moon

Just really happy...so i'm writing a happier poem :D

Sometimes i think the moon would be easier to get to then you...
Then i hear the beep.
I read you saying "i love you" and everythings okay.
I feel like you're right here.

Everyday, i wait for the moon to come up...
I know it brings you with it.
I read you saying that you hug me...then want the real thing.
But then you tell me not to be sad.

Sometimes i beg the moon to appear faster...
Then i pray for it never to leave.
I read you saying "i have to go to sleep hun" and feel lost.
I know you hate that time too.

Everyday i curse the moon...
I know you do the same.
I read you saying "you're so cute" after i act like a fool.
But then i call you silly.

The moon may seem closer than you...
but i know its not true.
The moon may bring me comfort...
but i feel safe with you.
The moon may always be there...
but you i will get to, for i love you too.

Author's Note

Just being happy...dont judge it too bad, please.
but if you have ideas how i can make it better...i'm all (in this case) eyes.

Reviews

[** LIVE LOVE **]

Stay happy and enjoy the peace that this world can give! This written expression is beautiful. Love the last stanza
"The moon may seem closer than you...
but i know its not true.
The moon may bring me comfort...
but i feel safe with you.
The moon may always be there...
but you i will get to, for i love you too."

Keep love alive in this life, and peace seems to always follow! :+)

[wolfsshadow25]

every well written

[Vei]

Isn't it the truth that somehow it seems a loved one can be harder to reach than the moon? A very beautiful poem!!!

[Winter McPherson]

I think its perfect just the way it is. It expresses your joy, vulnerability and insecurity all at the same time. I love the imagery of the moon connected with the one you love. Very nice poem!

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

i can understand the feeling...you did a great job :)

[17thWhitePrince]

WoW !!!
What A Most Spectacular Piece Of Poetry Indeed !!!
Such Beauty And Such Wonders You Feel !!!

"The moon may seem closer than you...
but i know its not true.
The moon may bring me comfort...
but i feel safe with you.
The moon may always be there...
but you i will get to, for i love you too."

A Great Marvel !!!