Fears

Fears

A Poem by Just Plain Me

Does he love me for me?
-or who he thinks I am?
Does he hear my lies?
-or do I hide the truth to well?
Does he know what I hurt everyday?
-or do I act invincible?
Does he understand me at all?
-or do I hide myself?

All these questions,
so many anwsers,
if only I could have one anwser...
maybe then my fears would cease.

© 2010 Just Plain Me


Author's Note

Just Plain Me
I realize almost every single one of my poems have questions in them...its just how i think, i dont really think in answers...just questions.

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I enjoy the way you address everything as a question, as something with different possibilities. It allows the reader to go many different directions, like a choose your own adventure book.

I like this piece b/c it is so real. We are all usually deeper than can be seen on the outside, and we have to wonder if the people we love really know us or if they only are able to see the air brushed person we portray when we are around others.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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we all have questions we have millions of answers too but nothing seems to fit
you did a great job with this! nice job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

amazing and quite thought provoking:)
you expressed deeply and in touch with the audience
hee hee I jus noticed I used the same picture icon for one
one of my writings . . . .. anyway, I really enjoyed reading this
thank you for sharing -arabella

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I enjoy the way you address everything as a question, as something with different possibilities. It allows the reader to go many different directions, like a choose your own adventure book.

I like this piece b/c it is so real. We are all usually deeper than can be seen on the outside, and we have to wonder if the people we love really know us or if they only are able to see the air brushed person we portray when we are around others.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

So many questions in the world using art is one way to express the way it annoys us when we cant determine an answer. Its really lovely and hits me deep, making me consider my questions

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is really good...it is hard to think in answers since sometimes we don't know them...so we ask questions hopeing someone does...Great Job :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

its basically confusion.......that evolves into fears when not solved for too long.....the insecurity basically...nice read...

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 26, 2009
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Just Plain Me
Just Plain Me

Olympia, WA



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