Don't you see?

Just some thoughts

Don't you see what your fighting does to me?
I wish you would look at what you do.
Can't you tell that it eats me up?
I used to look up to you two.
How can you hurt each other so bad?
I need to know what to do.
When is this nightmare going to end?
I remember your promise still too.
What will it take to make you stop?
I'm not the only one who notices...my friends also do.
Will you two ever give up?
I am afraid for what's going to happen to you two.

Author's Note

I wrote this in the car, cuz they were fighting again :'(

Reviews

[Jillian]

A reality far to many of us can relate to. The emotions from the in the moment experience are expressed so accurately here. Good job.