daddy

these are just questions i wish he would answer...

Daddy,

Who made it so i'm not your "princess" anymore?
     -Did they do it on purpose?

What happened to "i'll love you forever Sis?"
     -Did i do something wrong?

When did she become so special?
     -Do you even remember me?

Where does it say you can't love us both?
     -Do you hate me now?

Why am in not special anymore?
     -Is it cuz i'm sick?

How do i fix it?
     -Is it possible for you to love me again?

Daddy, just remember, that no matter what...i'll love you always.

Author's Note

I know this isnt exactly a poem...but i dont really know what it is, so thats what i'm calling it.

Reviews

[17thWhitePrince]

wow ... very nice ... I loved the format and the flow of it all ... just marvelous ... and I really liked the ending 'cause even though he put you through all that, you still Love him ... :)

also ... "Why am in not special anymore?" ... I think you should get rid of the "n" ... I think you ment to say "Why am i not special anymore?" ... :)

[Bran the Broken]

simply worded, but rich with the intensity of emotion

[M. Amphet Salt]

This is...the best piece of writing I can remember reading on this site. It really struck a nerve somewhere in my heart from a point a reverse point of view. I would give anything to have my little girl with me. Very good write.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I really like this poem...it flows very nicely and everything...very good indeed...Keep up the good work :)
Great Job again :)

[Markymark]

It's a free-style poem..that's what it is, and a good one. Your pour out your feelings in the piece, and it's the age old question both daughters and Dad's ask. What happened to our closeness. I wrote a piece called "for Alexis" that explores the other side (The Dad's side). My piece is called a villanelle. You can look up the form on the net...It's a far cry from the free-form but you'll understand...you have a poet's heart.

Markymark

[Silvario]

I really liked this. Very creative. Sweet and sad, which is a good thing cuz it invokes emotion from the reader. The format was pleasing as was the easy smooth flow. Well done. :)