i'm sorry

read the red letters by themselves afterwards...

I'm sorry i'm a brat
i'm sorry i'M not perfect
i'm Sorry i'm not her
i'm sorry i'm nOt him
i'm soRry i misbehave
i'm sorry i think diffRently
i'm sorry i'm not Your ideal child
i'm sorrY i have emotions
i'm sorry i prOved diffrent is better
i'm sorry for my individUality
i'm sorRy i hurt you
i'm sorry i dont givE a damn
i'm sorrY i'm not good enough
i'm sorry i'm Obsinant
i'm sorry 'popluar' isn't my statUs
i'm sorry i'm me!
but most of all...
I'M SORRY YOU'RE YOU!

i'm sorry you're foolIsh
i'M sorry you're stubborn
i'm Sorry for what you're missing
i'm sorry fOr your narrow mind
i'm sorry about what'S been done to you
i'm sOrry for you're judge mental ways
i'm sorry you've been huRt
i'm soRry you cant be sorry
i'm sorrY for your lack of life
i'm sorry For those that love you
i'm sorry i dOnt
i'm soRry for you're pain
i'm sorry for Your losses
i'm sorry for all Of what you've missed
i'm sorry you seem Unable to love
i'm sorry for your pain.
but even more than that...
I'M SO SORRY FOR YOU.

Author's Note

i wrote this last night after i fight i got in to...just tell me what you think...

Reviews

[** LIVE LOVE **]

I think this way a great way to express the emotions that you were feeling. It has a very liberating feel to it.

I feel like I have said I'm sorry my whole life until I realized as long as I wasn't hurting anyone; and the people that made me feel that way, just wanted me to feel sorry for something screwed up in their life.

You are a child of creation, and sometimes we get caught up with the negativity inside and out in this precarious world. Hang tight Just Plain Me there is nothing plain about You!�Just Me too :+)

[wolfsshadow25]

this was a great read, keep it up

[M. Amphet Salt]

Brilliant, and I love what you have to done in comparing the two stanzas.

[Awake.&.Unafraid]

This is really cool, I love how the red letters spell out the words at the end of each stanza. I also really like the change of mood between the stanzas. This is overall a really creative piece of writing! You have talent : )

[feline_fairy]

Hehe - I like the contrast between what starts out being something really sad and making the reader feel sorry for the writer, but then turns into something quite strong and non-pitying.

[17thWhitePrince]

wow ... so much pain and hurt ... wow ... I can really feel it as I read it ... wow ... I mean, I can easily sense all the hurt and all the emotions that you seemed to have felt ... wow ... must be very hard to go through something like that ... the poem overall was very well written indeed ... it all made perfect sense and it was really easy to follow along ... the red letters made it that much more emotional and riveting in a way ... all I can say now is that I am SO SORRY you had to endure all that and if there is ANYTHING I can do to help, you just let me know ... :)

[Bran the Broken]

very well-written, a lot of honesty and hurt and grieving passion. just run it thru a spell-check, there's a few silly typos....but besides that, great writing!

[Vaishali..^_^]

this is very beautiful....!great job....!
nice write...!

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This is really good! Great job! I love how you made the letters red. (:

[We are young.]

This was amazing, I really liked it, I liked hoe the red letters spelled it out at the end, I never thought of doing that,