20/20

20/20

A Poem by JustZo

20/20

Who sees the baby boy lost in the world
The one waiting to make his mark in society
The one unnerved by predestined biased
Who will pray for the little boy that dreams
Under the moon, thoughts of reaching the stars
Who will praise the man, who thinks the unthinkable, reaches the unreachable
And envisions the lost boys as veiled Kings

© 2015 JustZo


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too many talented minds go to waste these days
thought-provoking piece

Posted 9 Years Ago


great title for this. hindsight certainly is, but that's a poor excuse

Posted 9 Years Ago


Biases are rampant indeed and they tend to put us down. I guess we have to rise above this insanity...:)...........

Posted 9 Years Ago


So much in this world is now based on boys clubs, old boys networks, school ties etc that we are not giving those who may actually be able to change the world, for the better, a chance to thrive. Its all about jobs for the boys.
Too many are born into immediate states of deprivation and judged by their financial status.
A powerful poem - that final line is really impactful JZ.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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JustZo
JustZo

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