Suicidal

A Cheating Man's Point Of View

Suicidal

 

Now before you jump to conclusions about what this entry is about

Stop, it's not that. However, it is about pain.

If you guessed that, then you guessed right.

But it is not the intentional pain caused to yourself by your own hand

It is about a love story.

But one that ends in pain and not love.

It comes to an abrupt end end right under your nose

And by the time you notice it, its far too late.

That end comes by your own hand, "killing" the person that loved you dearly

And because that person is so much apart of you, in the end, you cause yourself that same pain

Killing the things that brought you together and made you fall in love

Her smile, her laugh, her style

You killed how she made you feel, Free.

 

True suicide is to kill the memory of yourself with the people who truly love you

You ugly your own image becuase of pride and ego

The two worst tools to have in life and in love

So love so much that you breath life into yourself, through them

 

Stop The Suicide!

(JustZo)

 

Reviews

[Don't just B, but B ama..]

A perfectly executed twist between suicide and love. Great piece, thanks for sharing it with us. The last line screams after revealing your true meanings previously, "Stop The Suicide!" Classic.

[ANTO]

This struck a chord with me due to a suicide epidemic in my own community Zo.
The writing was uniquely done - I was thinking after 6 or so lines - get to the story already ! BUT
that was the story - very subtley done

"ugly your own image becuase of pride and ego
The two worst tools to have in life and in love
So love so much that you breath life into yourself, through them" - fine words, fine advice, finely written

[Lizzie Mitchell]

I like this. It's profound.
I like the way it reads.

[Syreeta]

i really like this. im new to the poetry to, i love the wording. i would love for you to check out some of my poetry and give your feedback thanks!