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There should be a vacancy sign hanging from his neck

There should be a warning label to prevent those from being injured

There should be yellow caution tape strung from limb to limb

There should be flashing lights alerting people to stay away

He’s completely empty and disillusioned and doesn’t even see how far he’s gone

I’m sad, for him, but mainly for whose next

Reviews

[Ice QueenJen]

Wow what a great poem, and it kind of reminds me of my terrible ex! You should find a graphic artist to make a rendering of this writing to Patricia. Although you have one minor mistake in the 2nd to the last sentence.... you have hoe when I think you meant how. And I am going to definitely save this as a favorite, and maybe give out some read requests for you. Just wish I could give you a higher score...

[Tricia O'Brien]

I appreciate the time and feedback! Thank you
(Thanks for catching the spelling error)

[Ice QueenJen]

Your welcome!

[softlyfall]

This is when we have to relax and trust karma.
He will reap why he sews and so will the women in his path. If life and love were easy, we wouldn't be here at all.

[Coyote Poetry]

Many good titles for this poem. I like the title "Dangerous crossings". This is what came to my mind when reading. I liked the poem. Honest and direct thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tricia O'Brien]

Rad man. Thank you for your time and feedback. I appreciate it greatly. I must say, that's a gnarly title suggestion. I may take you up on that )

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem. Easy title to see.

[Poetic Beauty]

Warning signs with flashing lights on people would be nice. Great write

[Tricia O'Brien]

awesome, thank you for your time and your words :)

[GreenEyedPoet]

You can definitely feel the hurt in this poem, sad but a great read!

[Tricia O'Brien]

Yes! I'm stoked ya dig this.
Thank you for the time

[GreenEyedPoet]

Welcome. :)

[Chris]

no one comes with a warning label... just choices...

[Tricia O'Brien]

That's for sure!
Thank you for the time Chris, I hope all is well :)
Trish-

[Chris]

Life happens hon... that's the way of things.

[Tricia O'Brien]

Absolutely... some things just "fit/fall/and or placed" a bit better :)
I dig it regardless (life). I'm not done yet, far from it.

[Chris]

good. you make a difference.

[Tricia O'Brien]

Gee golly... thank you for saying so Chris. You're very kind and again, that smile crept up and smacked me in the face!
Thank you!!!

[Jamestown]

You have talent, this is a sad write but well written, thanks for sharing,
b-blessed!

[Tricia O'Brien]

I appreciate that and your time, thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. I felt the hurt, the pain and the sorriness for others who will be the next victims. A powerfully rad poem./..:)...............

[Tricia O'Brien]

awesome! Thank you for the feedback and time, you rock!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...............