Hold

Hold

A Poem by Tricia O'Brien

A memory that she holds is stronger than the blood that runs through her-
She remembers warmth and the feeling of “okay”
To most, this seems easy, if they really knew-
The greatest feeling and time is knowing they don’t
How’d this happen?
She begins but can’t finish anything
She’s split
A pain that’s life taking, to understand to comprehend you’d have to BE you’d have to REALLY know her
No new scars to explain
Now-her current state
Better to close her eyes in discomfort and feel that warmth she gained and lost just as fast
She loves him, still

© 2013 Tricia O'Brien


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We do hold on to precious things and other good and bad habits... As rads we needs to enjoy the fads. Keep holding...:)....
Excellent

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tricia O'Brien

9 Years Ago

Hah so true. You rock
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)....
Life doesn't do ...hold. Not very well at all.

Understand? Oh yes...I still smell "clove" and take a breath.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Tricia O'Brien
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A Poem by Tricia O'Brien