Same

Young Recovery

Bloody tears

Dirty past

Silent screams

Brutal secrets

Clips of anger

Saturated disappointments

Frail foundation

Haunting regrets

Misunderstood resentments

Lost in an empty room

Skeletons exploding behind each door

Unpredictable meltdowns

Jacked up excuses

Purity didn't have a fighting chance

Zero acknowledgment

Morally challenged

Reviews

[Allen Smuckler]

Thoughtful and personal write Patricia...I liked the descriptive nature of the piece spelled out in colorful, tightly woven snippets... Lack of punctuation added to the intensity of the write...in my opinion...
well done Patricia
allen
Not sure if this poem deserves a " for mature audiences only" classification but your choice. Does eliminate more people from reading it however.

[Tricia O'Brien]

Thank you for the time and feedback...
I agree, now looking things over, I'll open it up for more eyes to scan.
Thanks again

Trish-

[Sami Khalil]

"Haunting regrets
Misunderstood resentments
Lost in an empty room"
A nice write and those are my favorites...:)

[Tricia O'Brien]

Rad, I'm glad you dig
Thanks for the feedback

[Sami Khalil]

I dig it...You are welcome...:)

[Tricia O'Brien]

:-]

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Blue Belle]

It's different, interesting. The words have been selective carefully.

[Tricia O'Brien]

Indeed.
Thanks for you time and feedback, it's very helpful