Never Happened

The sky came down and brushed against her face

She was surrounded within a cloudy yet clear haze

The sensation sent her into shock

It was wildly warm and her arms were lifted up

She felt her body rise

Her feet floated above the ground she once traveled

She saw for miles

The time felt extraordinary long however it was just seconds

Those seconds left the greatest impact much more than years she experienced previously 

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"The sky came down and brushed against her face
She was surrounded within a cloudy yet clear haze

The sensation sent her into shock

It was wildly warm and "
That is some good poetry. I like the whole poem...Those lines are my faves...:)

[Tricia O'Brien]

Sami, thank you for your time and your feedback. It's wicked helpful
Thanks again

Trish

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure . Any time...:)

[Tricia O'Brien]

Indeed Chris, indeed

[Chris]

Yeah...discovering flight takes your breath away for a bit... its called out-of-body experience

[Tricia O'Brien]

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