Stay

Stay

A Poem by Tricia O'Brien
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Young Recovery

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I will forever be what I am
I will forever remember what I've done and what I haven't
I will always be this
This
I will find a way to let you have your way with me if possible, if you stay
I will forever be rough
I will forever know too much of self
I will forever have the fleeting thought of what once was
A life I lived, and it's like I was never there
I will forever have an answer or question, if you stay
I will share all of this with you
It's so close and can change at any second
The thrill of that keeps me going
I strive and jump off of other's failures today and you'll understand this, if you stay
Selfish
Maybe
But, I've done my time
Your pain makes mine less
Your faults help me make mine better
I will forever be this, if you stay
This I am
I am forever 
I will always carry whats needed to keep those things visible
I am unable to let go fully, thank God for that
I will open my hand and allow you to hold on, if you stay
I am loud, I am aggressive and I don't care for weakened minds
I will never tell you what you want to hear, if you stay
If you stay I promise to never be what I'm not

© 2013 Tricia O'Brien


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Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tricia O'Brien

11 Years Ago

Chris, continue please...
Chris

11 Years Ago

you are still "walking" that path those words relate to... more remains.
Tricia O'Brien

11 Years Ago

agreed...
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Mir
I love the honesty behind these words! Great, amazing job! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tricia O'Brien

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
Every inch of feedback helps in some way or another
Trish-
Thank you for the words and time.

I agree I must say =-]

Posted 11 Years Ago


Who could ask for anything more than that? Very nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tricia O'Brien

11 Years Ago

thank you so much for your time!

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A Poem by Tricia O'Brien