Honest

Honest

A Poem by Tricia O'Brien
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Young Recovery

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She's brutally honest
To the point where you'd rather false truths
She'll rip this apart just to see and understand why and how
She'll make an attempt to replace, fix and put back together
No piece will lay the same
It will hold a new shape and with that brings new meaning 
This excites her, a new, it's new, she's created it
She'll expect you to understand
She'll explain, well, but only once
She feels like no explanation is really needed so when the time comes when she must, she's already moved past mentally and most importantly emotionally and will give little effort to the one before her
She believes that if you don't see it for what it is or genuinely comprehend, than your just another momentary lapse in her journey
She's grateful for this though, another story, another something to think about down the road, but she'll drop the weight attached to it for she has no room to carry it further
She does not speak in code, she does not expect one to read her mind, she does not leave mystery, or not enough to warrant such lost communication
She's brutally honest
Good, bad and indifferent
She's always wondered if one would actually want this, and not just say so, but really truly crave truth
She has yet to come in contact with that...

© 2013 Tricia O'Brien


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Interesting perspective Chris...
I'm thinking I like what you're thinking....

Posted 11 Years Ago


This speaks more of a challenge I think... but will she accept it in return? Sometimes we think we want - but really aren't prepared when it's there before us.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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A Poem by Tricia O'Brien