Little

Young Recovery

A balance

A skilled science

Schooled and trained

Placed carefully

Setup beautifully

The natural dyed

Designed around fiction

Laced in store bought goods

On clearance

What a deal.

It's made up

Borrowed

Not returned

Stolen

She owns used things

A trail traveled

Path carved out

She hides openly

Yet unseemingly masked 

She finds pleasure in filthy discomfort

Sad and the only controlled happiness known to her

Satisfied with little

Equally unimportant

Impressively useless

She bows out cowardly

This, she does well

Reviews

[Criss ;)]

I couldn't control myself to read your more work...lol, this;s really pretty nice write.........but don't you think it could be a nice story if you write something on it......you know what "Trish", this write reflects your thinkin' power...your theme's great here, but i'm really a bit comfused to think that is that really you in this in writin' charater...mind if i askkkk ????/? lol
because i found as same like that...hahah, it's a fun, sad, alone, happy, joy, sorrow, rain, pain...n so on....onself.
this could really b a great story write if you start to do work onit....anyway....
well written, nice flow of ink....

have this 89.8/100 :)
take care......!!

[Tricia O'Brien]

HAHAH
wow, well where do i start? LoL
i thank you for the time and thoughts, I just write. have it be me or someone i see in the street. there is zero premeditation where i write, it just flows, ive always been that way. like sometimes i just have to pull over when driving because i think of lines....

thanks for the time again! you rock "criss"