Hobos and AleinsA Story by Adam G ThompsonThis is a little intro I wrote purely for practice' sake. I'm brand new to writing but I felt this would give people a feel for my style. Feel free to Criticize.The night, like every other night was cold and unforgiving
to those who had no place to go in Boston. Greg was wrapped up in a puke
stained blanket that had been practically rotting for the past six days since
he’d found it abandoned in the street as refuse. Aside from his own untrimmed
hair, this was all he had to shield himself from the relentless attacks of the
dispassionate creature he’d long ago as a civilized man called the wind. Every day was a fight for survival. Greg
couldn’t remember the last time he’d been able to crawl into a soft bed in a
room heated and seemingly protected from the world’s cruelty which now invaded
his every waking moment. In fact it had been so long that Greg had only a vague
idea of what he’d once been. Something to do with… Time had eaten away at his
memory, he’d become sentimental to the simplest things. This is why a putrefied
excuse for a blanket was like a hot shower after coming in from the cold. Aside from the
blanket, the day had been particularly bad. A group of thugs had in their words
“taught the old man an important lesson”. Greg had been scavenging for lunch in
a public garbage dump that apparently sat too close to their territory. He’d survived the beating but only had enough
strength to crawl back to his little corner behind an old shoe store which he
called home. He missed lunch and dinner.
Consciousness was now
in question, his vision fazing from a view of the stars to darkness. Both
seemed so similar that he no longer knew whether the specks were real or
phosphine he was hallucinating. It was one of those nights where he didn’t mind
the idea of not waking up in the morning.
He began to notice one of the illuminated splotches begin to grow
bigger. It had to be his closed eyes for sure… and yet it grew bigger. Suddenly
the light was blinding and there was a loud crash. His eyes slowly readjusted, then everything
was clear. Greg could not believe what he was seeing. There was a chunk of the
building directly behind the shoe store missing. In the adjacent alleyway he
could make out an inhuman shadow creeping away from what appeared to be the
sight of some sort of wreck. Greg felt sure he was dreaming and yet that horrible icy
pain he was always able to escape in his dreams was still penetrating his worn
undershirt. Despite his serious dehydration, sweat was forming on his temples.
He stood up with an energy he hadn’t felt in years and without delay he fled
from the scene of the impossible anomaly. When he reached the nearest police station no
one believed him. They threw him back
out on the street. Greg laughed at his own gullibility. He didn’t even bother
to try to convince anyone else. Of course no one was going to believe a
homeless man. Greg walked back to his spot behind the shoe store. The
energy that had seemingly cured him of his injuries was now gone. As he
approached his haven of newspapers and cardboard he wasn’t surprised to find
that the building behind the shoe store was perfectly intact and there were no
signs of any crash whatsoever in the adjacent alleyway. Even though Greg knew he wasn’t asleep the
events of the night were no more than a dream to him. He crawled back into his makeshift bed and
fell asleep with surprising ease. The cold that before had stabbed at him
constantly was now gone. Driven away as
if fearful of a presence even crueler than its own. © 2013 Adam G ThompsonAuthor's Note
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Added on April 30, 2013 Last Updated on April 30, 2013 Tags: Aliens, Hobos, Prologue, third person |