Music Poem

 Music

 

Music takes me through it all;

I listen as I'm roaming through the hall

I checked my iPods battery level, it was going to die

I stomped on the carpet and yelled,

"Why! Why! Why!"

I hurried to f.y.e; the new store down the block.

The said, "Hurry! Hurry! Hurry!"

They were running out of stock

Music is my favorite; there's o many different kinds

I listened to my new album, "Want"

It really blew my mind

Reviews

[DiggeyEleven]

You know for 12 that was a really great poem, you showed your love for music in such short paragraph, showed your frustration with only a few words. It was fun, it was a breath of fresh air. I'm sure you'll be able to take your skills very far, just keep writing. I think you had one type, did you mean to say "I" said; hurry hurry hurry?

[Miranda]

My feelings exactly! lol I love the poem, it reminds me of myself, keep up the great writing! :)

[Vaughn]

nice