We Are Alone

At the end of it all, we are alone. 

They left us alone

because they deemed us unimportant.

So we are alone,

Mother and I.

Reviews

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I really do enjoy your poetry. This short note say all in few words . Loneliness can make really deep wound. This feelings of unoticed and lack of empathy . But you are not completely alone there is mother and mother have you.

[JustNonsenseAndSugar]

I do lack empathy with others, I do not understand them. By reading others writings, I can try to understand emotions others feel. It's just a bit difficult for me.

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I will say I have lot of empathy for people who have same view on life like a me. But mostly when I speak with people I really don't get it what they saying. Actually it's same with poems here. I don't give too much reviews cause mostly poems here are very hard for me understand and also way how they are write are quiet boring.

[JustNonsenseAndSugar]

I agree, however even if I enjoy a piece I tend to enjoy it for the style of writing and the characters rather than the emotions. It is hard for me to convey my own emotions (I tend to always look upset or depressed to others) and it is difficult for me to convey emotions. I tend to copy emotions from other writings and place it in my own so my writing is more life-like. Alot of my writings are inspired by movies (this one by Queen of the Damned).

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I think for me write emotions is not problem. I think I more struggle how to put my emotions into logic contest. Sometimes I feel how my emotions overwhelming me and at my head my thoughts are in total chaos. Find and make order I find it very difficult. I think copying from other writing get can help you find
Your own emotions. I use movies for my writing too. When I see some movie abd really it's get stuck at my mind . I have to write or use some them from the movie.

[JustNonsenseAndSugar]

The only emotion that really overwhelms me is stress. I struggle to feel other emotions the same way others do. I get stressed or easily upset because I don't know how to respond. I suppose fear is also one. People and simple things scare me (I won't touch round, ball doorknobs for example)

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That's must be quiet difficult for a you. Living under stress it's quiet hard. I also get stressed quiet easily cause I feel people don't understand what I am try to say. I can also get easyly stuck at my conversation . People sometimes get up set about it. It's bring more confusion into my life. I am also scare from large group cause I think everyone will watching me and judging me . My social behaviour is quiet awakard and people call me crazy one or stupid one.

[JustNonsenseAndSugar]

I know how you feel. Take this into consideration however, your writing is amazing! :)

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Thank you very much. I think your writing is amazing too. I hope you have nice today .