Tracks

Leaving

lovers,

lost shoes,

forgotten keys,

a leather wallet,

a child,

a wife,

a mother,

a daughter,

a family

who thought they could do more. 

Reviews

[Asocial Sweetie]

I don't know why, but this makes me sad for a multitude of reasons. Maybe it's something that I am going through at the moment. I'm just wonder, "WHY?!" As I sit here and ask myself, "Can I leave?" Then I see the words: child, wife, mother, lost shoes, forgotten keys - well, pretty much every word in the poem and I just tell myself no.

This made me so sad! I think that means it is a great piece of work. Short and bitter,

[JustNonsenseAndSugar]

Sadness was the goal in this poem. My life was recently thrown into chaos and I just needed to get some words out.