Arrested

Arrested

A Poem by Jamar Saunders
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Couplet

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Arrested by her eyes
Caught me slipping by surprise

Found my heart on patrol
booked , never coming home

Guilty of the crime
Gazing from her thighs to her eyes

Love the color of her lips
And the danger of her hips

i'd be shot if i resisted
So i gave like Christmas

Soul enslaved by a mistress
new law is her intentions

© 2012 Jamar Saunders


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'Love the color of her lips
And the danger of her hips'

Great read; love the quoted verse! pat


Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh, the act of falling in love and getting.. . laid? Oooppss.. I like tha way you convey the explicit into a wholesome poetry, keeping it more positive and cute:) This is nicely penned.

Posted 12 Years Ago


"Arrested by her eyes" so much in that one sentence. Love it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


"Found my heart on patrol
booked, never coming home" are my favorite two lines! This is indeed a well-written poem and was interesting to read. :)
Amazing!


Ashley Rivers-- your friend ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


"Love the color of her lips

And the danger of her hips"

-I love these lines. you somehow portrayed a very seductive woman. powerful descriptions indeed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


With a law like love, there's no escaping.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on August 2, 2012
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Jamar Saunders
Jamar Saunders

Chester, PA



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