Love

Tanka about love

Love is sacrifice 

Shown thorough vulnerability

Formless like water

Having no identity 

Our missing solution

Loneliness's remedy 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Wow, this is absolutely beautiful and definitely well-written. Your talent is captured through these six lines. I think you described what "love" really is. Amazing job! :D



Ashley Rivers-- your friend ;)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Well done. Excellent read and write. Definitely our missing solution

[Irene]

wow. short and sweet but so powerful.

[Yheela]

Very beautiful, hopeful.

[SmileBig :)]

I really like this :) very well written!

[TheReal]

This is great :)