My Darling

Here you are, all grown up

But you still have that full cup

Brimming with regret and pain

You find yourself carrying a mental cane

Wishing to start a new life

But, my darling, put down that knife

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. A lot of mystery hidden in the statements. I like the use of language and the very strong ending. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Elise Pehrson]

"You find yourself carrying a mental cane," this is a very creative line. So much power in this poem! Great job!

[Freckled Princess]

Really speaks out and proves what you fear.
Good job