The Summer Breeze

The sun filtering through the trees

The soft, musical hum of the bees

She heard the leaves crunch under her feet

She felt the heat

Her eyes filled with tears

He had been gone so many years

His memory still lingered in these trees

And woven throughout the summer breeze

Author's Note

It's a little rough..

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I could feel the sadness and yearning for another person. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Samantha Lynn]

It's not really that detailed. Maybe if you add more lines on how much it hurts to loose someone you care about?? IDK, I am just give ideas out for you. :)

[Freckled Princess]

I like it. The rhythm keeps going in a bouncy, but subtle way, and the emotions really come through.
Well done!
Keep writing!