Sliping away to insanity

Sliping away to insanity

A Chapter by JustAlex

Sliping away to insanity

Sliping away to hell

I saw your blood come out

I saw your light dull

You were killed infront of me

and you were killed without me

to hold your hand

As he killed you in that car

that pshycopath laughed and laughed

then shot himself

Leaving  me with no one to love

Why is it me?

Why did you leave me all alone

I cry with endless tears as night goes by your body

Cold and empty soul.

You were killed right infront of me

without me to hold your hand,

and here I am 5 years later

sobbing my useless tears on your cold grave

Which stands upon lonely streets, Where your blood layed it's self

Sliping away to insanity

Sliping away to hell

I saw your blood come out

I saw your light dull

You were killed infront of me.



© 2011 JustAlex


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This is so powerful and intense! Check the spelling on 'slipping'.

I like the idea of '5 years later'. that adds power to the story.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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JustAlex
JustAlex

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