I wrote your name

I wrote your name on a peice of paper but  I acidently threw it away....

 

I wrote your name on my hand, but I washeed it away...

 

I wrote your name in the wet orange sands but the waves whispered it away...

 

 

I wrote your name on my heart, and forever it will stay....

Reviews

[Clockwork]

When words are written on the heart they are always remembered, even if only in feeling, or an episode of deja vu.

[Kate Hunter]

well done.

[Hello, Goodbye]

fantastic usage of repetition and brevity.. the actual word imagery here is impressive and the message long lasting because of it.. great write..

[Maya Storm]

ohhhhhhhhh that's so sweet :) The heart is the only thing that is able to store what you really need to keep. I like the sentiments of it all.

[.quan.011.]

This is a nice written short poem. I didn't noticed any grammar error. Good Job!