I set you free

I set you free from your curse

Your chain like fence around your wrist

I shine light on your dark halo

you dont need to pretend for an angel

you dont need to be here for a lost soul

You came to me with a price

Your a picture perfect

Your too perfect for an angel

Your god's master peice

 

 

I set you free from your chain like fence

The un-natural gray in the sky

The past laughter

The presence of holding your hand

Your smiles were gold

Your eyes gleamed like dimonds

 

I set you free from your dark halo

no need to worry

Im clinically insane now

no need to worry

Im gone now

no need to worry

Im leaving now

 

I set you free from your angel

you dont need to cry anymore

I have destoryed my holy grail of exsistence

Feel the authentic warmth of the sun

of a true angel

gods right hand

 

I set you free from me

and constant burden in the dark

 

I set you free from your price

me

the ocean that has swallowed you whole

 

I set you free

from the perfect picture

your garden

your haven

 

I set you free

From this angel

the dream in the sky

tags with the clouds

 

I set you free

from my hand

 

 

Free of burden in the dark

free from the oceans tears

free from the butterflies and the bunnys

free from the garden

free from my heart beat

free of me

free from an angel

free from your chain like fence around your wrist.

Reviews

[E.H. Monroe]

Clearly putting the other above the narrator for the price less of an angel.


The fact that the author is setting someone free but there is a read apprehension is her steps. Or read like she already knows that someone cold is coming

The dark glow that took the poor girl for a ride, cleaned up and then dumped her behind like used trash is a tough bite.

Of dismantling his old “angel” and replacing it with the gift you were given just to see happiness.

The constant reminder of how the subject is free only enforces the feeling that he may not be, or that the writer has taken on the fence around the wrist.

You have a gift ms. Lexi. You write a multi layered poem that can be open for interpretation that plenty DON’T do.

Well done

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This hit me as the most sincere apology.
I felt as if there was a lot of remorse and
history that hide between the lines.

[Nothing Personal]

Good poem ! The repetitive scheme works fine..and the intensity and the wording is real good...

[Frantzuu]

I set you free from your curse
Your chain like fence around your wrist
I shine light on your dark halo
you dont need to pretend for an angel
you dont need to be here for a lost soul
You came to me with a price
Your a picture perfect
Your too perfect for an angel
Your god's master peice


I love this stanza, a very passionate poem and well written.
Haven't talked to you in a while, how are you? :)