I set you free

I set you free from your curse

Your chain like fence around your wrist

I shine light on your dark halo

you dont need to pretend for an angel

you dont need to be here for a lost soul

You came to me with a price

Your a picture perfect

Your too perfect for an angel

Your god's master peice

 

 

I set you free from your chain like fence

The un-natural gray in the sky

The past laughter

The presence of holding your hand

Your smiles were gold

Your eyes gleamed like dimonds

 

I set you free from your dark halo

no need to worry

Im clinically insane now

no need to worry

Im gone now

no need to worry

Im leaving now

 

I set you free from your angel

you dont need to cry anymore

I have destoryed my holy grail of exsistence

Feel the authentic warmth of the sun

of a true angel

gods right hand

 

I set you free from me

and constant burden in the dark

 

I set you free from your price

me

the ocean that has swallowed you whole

 

I set you free

from the perfect picture

your garden

your haven

 

I set you free

From this angel

the dream in the sky

tags with the clouds

 

I set you free

from my hand

 

 

Free of burden in the dark

free from the oceans tears

free from the butterflies and the bunnys

free from the garden

free from my heart beat

free of me

free from an angel

free from your chain like fence around your wrist.

Reviews

[Jonathan De Elvira]

*wipes my tears*..actually this poem was so sad Ran...but I'm so proud and glad that we managed through...and yes..my angel is one amazing writer in the whole world...*smiles happily*..I'm so proud of your talent baby...and seeee? you're sooooooo talented angel..

[sentimental~ galore]

This is such a good write....to find love like that is pretty unique. i enjoyed the various comparisons throughtout the work, nicely done!

[Antonio Valentino]

Very good. At first I thought it was one, talking to another, but after rereading it, now it sounds more, to me, that its one, talking to, themself.

Good writing here, glad I fell upon it.
Antonio

[Jane Doe]

soo yea shoot when you ready

[Jane Doe]

It's good lexi
I know me and you never got along and all
but send me a message or anything ill be glad to talk

your (hopefully) aquaitence
abbie:)

[Tate Morgan]

Free of burden in the dark

free from the oceans tears

free from the butterflies and the bunnys

free from the garden

free from my heart beat

free of me

free from an angel

free from your chain like fence around your wrist.


could this be a poke at reality A bracelet of love of sorts .Young love ah the thought of it makes me smile

[J. R.]

The repetition works well with the poem. i'm sorry I haven't gotten around to reviewing your work sooner, I've been busy.

[T. J. Blackburn]

good job. Sorry for a less than full review. I'm clearing my read requests between class work but wanted you to know that I did read it.

[Dream Weaver]

A deeply profound write Lexi, beautifully written!