Inaccurate Profundity

The desperate eyes of the lonely soul

only trying to escape the frenzy through a cage of glass

listening to people rush through citys

the irony  we create ourselves

how we are so ignorant now as we were years before

Its fantastic how we say one thing and mean another

but yet we acquiesce in every thing that is purposed

so shall we dance and fabricate the lives we live, the song that is played

or embrace the sweet sound of knell

annocing humanity and intelligence and hope is all gone

our constitution...our freedom is far beyond repair

but also most trash the human existance with stupidity

I wish I noticed the profoundity much sooner

and i would of flawlessly flew away with the birds

as i wish over and over every waking day and night

as our eyes look over, and analize every aspect of a normal day

but very few apreciate the little things

so these desperate eyes never speak

her own story is too lurid to ever look away from

 

 

Author's Note

anything i should fix or add or delete
(besides grammer issues thaaaank you :p lol)
anyways let me know hope you enjoyed :)

Reviews

[Dream Weaver]

Such a wonderfully profound write..
A great observation of human behavior.
Well done...Lexi

[Walter Scott Morrison]

I like it. I just love the honesty of how you feel. No false pretenses or faked lines

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I like the passion in the words. You really speak about things that
we all feel. Your story here has made you become quite a leader.