Inaccurate Profundity

The desperate eyes of the lonely soul

only trying to escape the frenzy through a cage of glass

listening to people rush through citys

the irony  we create ourselves

how we are so ignorant now as we were years before

Its fantastic how we say one thing and mean another

but yet we acquiesce in every thing that is purposed

so shall we dance and fabricate the lives we live, the song that is played

or embrace the sweet sound of knell

annocing humanity and intelligence and hope is all gone

our constitution...our freedom is far beyond repair

but also most trash the human existance with stupidity

I wish I noticed the profoundity much sooner

and i would of flawlessly flew away with the birds

as i wish over and over every waking day and night

as our eyes look over, and analize every aspect of a normal day

but very few apreciate the little things

so these desperate eyes never speak

her own story is too lurid to ever look away from

 

 

Author's Note

anything i should fix or add or delete
(besides grammer issues thaaaank you :p lol)
anyways let me know hope you enjoyed :)

Reviews

[Kevin McKenna]

"Its fantastic how we say one thing and mean another"

Dig!

[Steve]

Excellent! Dont change this.

[Phibby Venable]

too often our words and actions fail to acknowledge
each other. I enjoyed this. Wonderful writing.

[Frantzuu]

I love this piece, very strongly written, and very meaningful. :)

[SilentDreamer]

Love this. It has so much meaning behind it and so many good points. Yes, so true. Great word choice too. Awesome job, keep writing!

[Kelly M.]

wow its perfect the way it is. Don't change it! History is a funny thing..Humans don't know what to do with themselves. Really makes you think. The picture was just perfect for this and that made me want to read this. Keep on writing! :)

[Crow]

I like it just the way it is; your statements simply illustrate how history is wasted because nothing seems to be learned.

Very nice!

[Bryän]

People live symbolic lives. Everything said or done only has a different meaning behind we do not notice. Only people who don't need to live a life of such dishonesty, will want to escape.
This is told with a unique voice... never lose that.

[Member Now Left]

I can see a lot of feeling went into this one and it reaches out to me

[Aven]

You really struck a chord with me. Loving it. :)