Lylacs

Just a sweet bliss full whisper

Red silky hair cascade her pale high-way cheekbones

Blue eyes that shines more like blue moons

in empty night skys

two blue silver moons

red cherry lips, the kind that can kiss you

and make you go numb through your entire body

making that you only can feel the softness of her lips,

taste of chapstick and whiskey and soft delight of strawberrys

eaten at 3 am

she have a voice thats elegant and cryptic

the voice that echos through your mind after a sweet whisper in your ear

somthing that will trance you, make you snap into reality, make you listen to her

she have skin, moderately pale, but softer than silk, when she holds you and cradels you

in her arms you fall asleep as if you were her child

her touch is unbearable , when she slides her hand on your chest

you lay there and stare into her blue moons 

and wonder why did god give you such a gift?

she manages to keep you awake at night admireing her curves , her essence

her innocence, her prescense

by 3 am she was up eating strawberrys

she left a taste on your lips, you still taste her hours later

5 am shes still sleeping, in dreamtime, you watch caress her silky hair

6 am you fall asleep with your hand on her heart

8 am she has woken up, she now smiles like mona lisa and softly whispers in your ear

 

                 " I love you"

 

 

Author's Note

Just wanted to do somthing i like to call a shadow, i want to see how i would look like in a poem romanticly based on my features :) hope you enjoyed
btw the poem is called lylacs, some might not understand but soon enough you'll get it ;)

Reviews

[Steve]

This is fantastic! I think you and I think alike. And that is startling. I love this poem. This was exciting to read!!

[Courtland Sky]

i thought this peace was amazing.! you are an amazing poet.

[Aven]

sensuous, beautiful, enthralling!

[Walter Scott Morrison]

Oops totally didn't read the Note here. Now I feel like an idiot

[Walter Scott Morrison]

Wow I want this girl but it reminds me of you

[Brittany W]

This was beautiful, great job.

[MedievalMetal]

Darkly erotic. As a male I can identify with the sensual and emotional context. This shows an insight and intelligence far beyond your years.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Beautiful work. I love this poem! I felt as if I was in a dream. The entire work was enchanted. It was love and bonding in a snowglobe. I wished the magic would never stop falling.

[Steve]

Mmmmm. Very nice! Loved this one!