Ubiquitous

Here and there

There and here

Left to right

North and south

Heaven and hell

Fictious and reality

 

I am not here but there, Not seen but heard

Your eyes are shut but im awake

 

Like a needle in a haystack, forever in limbo

I sit  bare skin breathless watching Night and Day

 

An eagle can fly as high as it wants

be anywhere it wants

do what ever it wants

 

But we are forever preach on freedom

yet most are bound like ankors in deep waters

 

I long to be Ubiquitous ; I long to be free.

 

 

"Dream as if  You'll live forever, live as if you'll die today" -James Dean

 

  

Reviews

[Steve]

Congrats!! You are the champ!! I'm proud of you.

[Dani]

Absolutely wonderful.

[Member Now Left]

Lovely

[Crow]

This piece gives me a sense of freedom from everything, yet being apart of everything and everywhere.

I enjoyed the read.

[Tony]

"But we are forever preach on freedom
yet most are bound like ankors in deep waters"
I love it. It is the Truth.
This poem describes an oncoming understanding of the world that is somewhat like.....getting over a bad flu.
Nice.

[Hello, Goodbye]

Great stuff.. The resolute conviction is expressed in a strong but not forceful way..

[alan khan]

I sit bare skin breathless watching Night and Day

that line and the picture with this poem, made me really enjoy this write. great work.

[Brandon]

Very nice i loved this one a lot great work keep it up i hope to see more writing from you when i start acceptong rr's again


100/100

[Mark]

reminds me of Gibrans poem on dying. "What is it to die but to stand naked in the wind and melt into the sun?"