When The Soilders Came Home (revisted)

It's revisting day! So enjoy~

They all went out to say hi,
When the soldiers came home,
But he sat alone confused and upset,
Because Daddy didn't come home.

They all cried, and hugged, and kissed,
When the soldiers came home,
Thoughts rand through his mind,
About why Daddy wasn't home.

Everyone cried tears of joy,
When the soldiers came home,
He tried not to cry out of sadness,
But he felt weak since Daddy didn't come home.

Mommy sighed and said be happy,
When the soldiers came home
He wondered what he had to be happy for
Daddy had promised he'd come home

But Daddy wasn't coming home.
And all the boy could do was cry.
Daddy broke his promise.

When the soldiers came home.

Author's Note

So you let me know what you think of the revisit. Oh and about the picture! We'll say that's the path the Soldier's came home on.

Reviews

[ShadowWolf]

One of the sad results of war...those who don't come home. Even sadder is the loved ones left behind.
Well done!

[A.J. Smith]

Great! This was a very good move. You're doing great...keep it up!

[A Soal In The Sky]

I like it very much! Its very descriptive, but yet sad.