Fire

my lover

Last night we made love, sweet love
Real love
Last night it was real, real sweet
Real pure

Over and Over you were saying my name
More and more this is less of a game
You're in my heart and on my mind
. . All the time

Together we rock, my insides on fire
..(It's desire)
Together we crest, kissing, a lick
..(Magic)

Over and Over you fueled this girls' fire
More and More I fear you will tire
You're in my pants and on my brain
..It's insane

Reviews

[Not A Writer]

Pretty erotic here. Not my type of reading, but I know a person would think it's good. Good rhyming, description, imagery, and communication. You're use of enjambment and parenthesis was pretty good. I'm surprised no one else reviewed this yet.