Come to my Cave

Trust issues

I dug me a hole, and now I'm down in it
There's no way out ..but I think I kind of like it

It's cold down here, and a little dirty
There may be a ladder but I'm not about to use it

Inside this hole (it's a cave) I can ponder all alone
My thoughts will dig me deeper ..and I think I kind of like it

No shovel or tools could create my filthy dwelling
Only a mouth, a will, a fear: My defense gear

Yea, I see you up there, looking down, looking in
I'm not coming out, and you're not coming in

Author's Note

I'm totally gonna cave... but until then: enjoy my vent.

Reviews

[Elissa; the genuine art..]

This is such an edgy write; it's great!
I must say that I love the lines where you say
"..and I think I kind of like it"
This is full of character.
Excellent work!

-Elissa :)

[Jen]

This is awesome... I really like the last line, for some reason... So typically blunt of you :P

Hahaha, overall love it, good write fo shooooo

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow.. I really liked this vent.. and I have felt similar many times. With the way things are today it's not really a wonder.. sometimes you really can't trust no one is the truth I have found. With higher expectations, people using and jumping over one another.. whether diplomatically or not..

I can see why many don't trust. Please don't cave, it's just the way things are sometimes you need to keep faith and hope protected when times are tough. Trust takes years to gain and mere minutes to lose.. it just means you have standards! Awesome job with the honesty and flow here!

[Claudia]

Wow, this is really good.My favorite part is
"No shovel or tools could create my filthy dwelling
Only a mouth, a will, a fear: My defense gear"
its very creative. Way to go!