Fresh

Trying

Why push? I push
Push push pushed you away
Why push why not?
You f**k with my chi just saying 'hey'

All this commotion, emotion
Your body was hot, soul was an ocean
In your eyes was all I could want
Your heart huge, and this you would flaunt

I think this is too f*****g tough
All of this love s**t's pissing me off
And you have finally had enough
Well, if I could, for you I'd be soft

Instead I go Rogue, after saying I.L.U.
I hope you can turn it off, too
Doesn't matter though, we're for sure through
But f**k baby, I really love you

Author's Note

This is a bad poem.

Reviews

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It's not bad! It's captures a harsh emotion and brings it out beautifully and powerfully! Poetry isn't a science after all.. it's from the heart and sometimes the heart wants to roar and bang the pen on the page, till the ink drips from the table!

I liked it! *Smiles*
*Hugs!* - Tara

[Jen]

Nah, I like :)