Gone

All the walks we took
I can still remember
the way you stood
 A couple months ago in December
doesn't seem so far away
bad things happen everyday
It's like rain in the summer
so fatal yet we love the sound of thunder
you held me so tight
was the last time

I'l never see your smile
Picture are just wrong
feels like you only left for a while
But it all goes on
like no one noticed you're gone.
I feel so alone
In this world there's no one

feels like the end
no one understands
cold are my hands
knowing you won't hold them again
all I need is you
but you're far from near
leaving me blue
with everything to fear
standing on an edge
everything you said
plays like a song
as long as you're gone

Reviews

[Bailey C. Writing]

I'l never see your smile
Picture are just wrong
*I'll
*Pictures
This was sad, but I could relate to it, and I really like it. It was written pretty good, just noticed about 2 typos. But beautiful, good job

[Megan M]

Wow, this is an amazing poem.