FRUSTRATED

FRUSTRATED

A Poem by Jupiter Jazz

Anticipation

 becomes

Frustration

which leads to

Trepidation

which becomes

Agitation

that soon leads to a

Fixation

that leads back to a feeling of

Perturbation,

that all comes back to one question.

 

WHY CAN'T I WRITE?!?!

© 2011 Jupiter Jazz


Author's Note

Jupiter Jazz
I'm getting super annoyed now!! I've had several poems in mind for a couple of weeks and I still can't find the words to write them! WHAT. THE. HELL??

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An interesting format that I'd normal not venture to imitate, and I'd even reprimand others for, however, the presentation is what makes this poem unique. Excellent word choice. However, your last two lines do break the flow of your poem; while some may choose to make the argument that this may fit, I, however, would challenge you to find a way to bring it back into your rhyme scheme and general meter flow. I'd be interested to see how it turns out. Great job, you have an interesting style.

Posted 13 Years Ago


yikes good poem and i hate brain freeze when i have ideas but dont know how to write it good poem tho

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really hate it when that happends to me. I swear i go through this like once a month haha but i like the piece you just created ^^. Its cool.

Posted 13 Years Ago


writer's block? poem shows the feeling of every writers frustration at some point, i like your poem, but hate the cycle.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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