The End

I based this entire poem off the last line which I heard on an episode of South Park. The J.Lo one

And so it ends here.

It is all over for me.

My sins have finally caught up with me.

The mask has been cracked, I am the only fool to be found now.

See through me and strike my heart with your piercing stares.

The mask no longer protecting me, I find myself weak.

Unable to handle the contempt in the demeanor of those around. I find only one path to take.

The beat of my heart slows, breathing now takes effort.

My eyes peek at the world one final time and then shut for good.

As I struggle to remain conscious, words unspoken, promises broken, views shaken, paths taken, all of the life I have experienced flow through my mind.

A life truly lived, having experienced greatness and degradation.

And now the life ending with regrets and sudden edification.

And so I wonder.. I wonder... will I dream.....

 Senpai - The End, Anime writing contest

Reviews

[nono]

I like
"My sins have finally caught up with me.
The mask has been cracked, I am the only fool to be found now.
See through me and strike my heart with your peircing stares."
That part. It feels like something I can really relate too. This is great work. Good choice of words. :D Keep up the awesome work.

[Daydreamer54]

wow i thought this was deep an epic poem and picture! great write! ^^