Perfect

The light shines upon my bare skin,

 

Awakening me and alerting my senses.

 

Stretching languidly,

 

I find myself surrounded in serenity,

 

Almost perfect.

 

The window beckons me closer with its warm embrace.

 

I see a butterfly twirl and create a pattern in the sky.

 

Smiling, I take in a breath and scent the tea in the air.

 

Jasmine.

 

I turn to find you.

 

Now it's perfect.

  Bronze Medal - Perfect, Albert's Poetry Cafe ~ Tovli's Ten words

 

Author's Note

Write a poem using the ten (10) words below.

create
pattern
twirl
window
butterfly
senses
breath
tea
light
bare

Reviews

[Helen Crutchett]

oh, this is beautiful Jazz. A sweet, charming, smooth write with the "ten words" perfectly scattered in there seamlessly. Well done!

[angelina neves]

Lovely!

[Raspberry Rebel]

A perfect morning perfectly presented...lovely flow and feel to this...

[Raspberry Rebel]

A perfect morning perfectly presented...lovely flow and feel to this...

[Marie Harrison]

Ah...nice poem Jazz!
I love your use of the words.
What wonderful images float in my head now.