Dreamer's Eden

It was as if the sky had cracked open. Sunlight peaking through to shine down on Eden.

Lighting green paths and chasing away devious shadows.

No fear was known here, just everlasting peace.

The clouds wept with rapture and the land bloomed in gratitude.

What wonders their were to uphold in this world long forgotten, untouched by man.

Impressive - Dreamer's Eden,  Nature writing contest

Author's Note

This poem is based off of the Twilight Zone episode, “The Wall,” from 1989.

Reviews

[Adam M. Snow]

Beautiful, I love the imagery

[Marie Harrison]

Oh what a beautiful poem!
I love the scene.

[Daydreamer54]

I loved this poem! u have wonderful imagery and it was beaurifully wriiten! great write!

[nono]

I hear about how popular Twilight Zone used to be....but I've never actually seen it. Maybe if they made a new series? Anyways...I like this poem. I really especially like the "The clouds wept with rapture and the land bloomed in gratitude." You truly have a way with words. Keep up the awesome work. I'm sure you'll go far.