This Is war

I've read many war novels, seen many historian and theres plenty of war around so this is for that cause ( I like a challenge )

Blood sparks all over the ground,

Man drinks the nectar of death

This solution explodes with the vibration of their guns,

it wipes out all reality,

it manipulate the weak mind that hides their fear,

it shall bring silence between the crimes of the bullets of shell's fired near the bleeding ground,

the souls of the weaping and ludicrous frags that has been left behind,

the song of the gun, its the sound of joy, the sound of death, the sound of emortality to death,

the gun has spoken, it shouts with its mighty rowr, it keeps track of its enemy, and anniolates those who are weak, with cries it freaks, the bursting scream of death in its joy ride, carring a wagon filled with death souls, while others are exploded into the rolling agony, 

THIS IS WAR!

Author's Note

into death really hahah

Reviews

[r. f. jordan]

this is violent imagery aptly portrayed to embody violence. "ludicrous frags", "nectar of death", "the song of the gun, its the sound of joy"; these are bold statements meant to convey horror. that those participating in it actually find joy while escaping their own fear, i also believe to be accurate. striking work.

[Coyote Poetry]

War is measure in seconds. Don't take much to be killed or kill another man. The scene of war can't be written. I like the description and confusion in this poem. Soldiers in the middle of life and death must make quick and fast decisions. A wise person can forget and walk away. Ain't too easy. I recommend for young people. Go to school and leave war for the people who want it? A interesting poem.
Coyote