Love with no chance

love seem different but equal

Something the life have forgotten to take with, without care was thoughtless not to say it is you, not seeing that your special, that you make the Northern star still, which has it´s amazing beauty on you, you make Athena´´ the goddest of strategy´´ anrage in jelousy that she cant compare to you, the way that you make angels seem demons infront of you, with a heart full of will and beautiful as gold, breakable as glass, but strong as a dimond to say these words is what any guy would like loving you is what all want but being, dying, serning for you is my will to the past to the future but not present becsue you are taken by the others which are just like you and better than myself.

Author's Note

sorry if i spelled something wrong but life has errors

Reviews

[alexlessah]

I love this!

[Jane Lockheart]

fantastic

[whispereversolightly]

such emotion through out, very well expressed

[Vestigial Appendage]

Yeah, life has errors. It's all good.
Nice write.