One, Two, I'll be coming for you

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I scream and scream while i just hear theirs louder and louder while my tears walks on air.

2 hours ago

We are lost aren't we?, I told to Mike
He looks at me like he knows where he is "No, I'm just taking this road"
I look at him while Donna and Chris are on the back seat blasting their music like animals.

Can you guys put that down we are lost", i yelled at them.

Donna looks calm and says to Chris like she doesn't hear me "CHRIS DO YOU KNOW WHY ARE WE ON THESE WOODS IF WOODS ARE NOT ON THE MAP"

Chris laughs and starts to head bang with the beat of their noise back there

My eyes wounder off towards the window and from the trees i see a very slim creature, very tall like the trees and outstanding arm lengths i yell at Mike to stop. Mike hit the brakes like a mad man in a race car action game. I get out and scout the area to capture that beast with my camera to re see this momentum of truth.

Come here", My friends yell at me to get back in the car before it starts to rain.
Where are we"? I told them with my hair on my face.
They all look at me like I'm crazy and said "We are in the woods of wonders" Mike told me, "We are looking for big foot" Donna exclaimed, while Chris blushed and did not look at me and whispered, "To truly see what we have missed".
I look at Chris and he just went for a walk with his face red like an apple freshly picked. Donna with her emotion warped her whole face on my chess and whispered, "remember he is mine" and left my chess and went to my cheek, and once again " I've told you before that if you steal him from me, bad things will happen between us" I looked at her like she is crazy, "I don't know what you are talking about".

While i was mocking her, she grabbed my arm with tears on her eyes and looked like a lost puppy in the rain and told me in a soft voice, "Please I really..." she just blushed like vanilla with strawberry when Chris came back cooled down. " he is all yours " i gave her a smile.

We all went in the car and the sky turned pitch black, after we drove for like half an hour. I could not get that thing out of my head.
Its been hours already i complained to Mike and he looks at me for only few seconds and the car flips, we all scream, while the car tours the world in less than a minute. I Luckily get out while the car keeps its wheels running. "I can move" all of them cry, but i couldn't hear a single thing just their lips moving, i couldn't hear anything besides the beeping noise. My eyes wounder once more and i see that creature, this time with some sort of suit, it walks like a man, very skinny, tall, man, He reaches for Mikes hand and pulls him out like he was nothing, than i see blood coming down Mikes hand. This man is ripping his limbs piece by piece,he yells and who wouldn't if your arms and legs are being pulled and teared into pieces, I scream and force my body to get up and run. Than my hearing came back just to hear the ghoul laughter while he enjoys ripping Mike into twigs, i look carefully at his face, and with shock i ran, ran and ran until i my tears feel like acid rain, " He has no face, HE HAS NO FACE" I scream than i hear Donna scream and after her Chris. I cry and yell "I'm sorry I AM SO SORRY" than i started to run again, after i ran like a soldier in war, i stop to catch my breath than i turn my hear from a voice

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Only a note was found on a pile of bones, saying "One, two, he is coming for you
three four, better lock your doors, Five six do you hear him break those sticks, seven eight better stay awake, nine ten now your died."

Author's Note

It's a bit odd for me to do a story so its around my 3rd

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good tale. I like the use of numbers to reproduce fear and story. I enjoyed the story. Filled with mystery and fear. Thank you for sharing the excellent story.
Coyote