Dream Of the last sight

self explain

Drop by drop it falls on my gasping skin, my eyes near to go, pitch black the sky looks, watching these drops one last time,

Realizing that my body is being hold, as she is told "He will be fine young one", nor she does not let go, she hold him with a grip, crying and trying to let her hold loose, but it was no use, I look up once more the sky is no more,

Easy the wind blows, there's not a single enmity feeling in these souls, while they cry, shout with all their might, one dark robbed man reaches to take a grasp for the hand that can not be touched,

As this untouchable hand reaches, he looks back at the one laying down, covered with the tears that weeded for the lies that those tears are not real, nor will be true,

Misguided from all these dry sand on top of this blue water lies only one tear pure of true stone, the tear of the young girl, who was as beautiful as the night can get, while these savages cry to try to hide what they really are, since this white rose has landed on the body of the one who looked up to the bright night, gives her last words,

"Tonight is the end of our time, as these tears scream for the true feeling that my heart shouts, these eyes will lie  on you on last time" With a seal of her kiss these were her last words.

Author's Note

It's just a sad poem after someone looses someone special.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very sad poem. I wanted to know more. Hard when time for separation for any reason come. I like the way you ended the poem.
"Tonight is the end of our time, as these tears scream for the true feeling that my heart shouts, these eyes will lie on you on last time" With a seal of her kiss these were her last words."
Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Junger]

Thanks for reviewing a very touching poem, Most of my writing is from the heart and what I see, again thanks for the review.

[deepblue04]

wow, this is simply amazing! good job!